This is a start, but you need to show more effects that gravity are having on the character if that makes sense. Hope this helps.
thanks for the insight, I'll try and make some improvements
Great work, but next time try doing your final image in as few lines as possible. It helps with your drawing skills immensely.
Thanks! Lately I've noticed I've been doing less lines so hopefully in the near future I'll have a clean piece! :D
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